Merge pull request #25105 from rwestMSFT/rw-1201-2022-release-notes

Acrolinx pass on 2022 release notes

Author: liljack17

docs/sql-server/sql-server-2022-release-notes.md

@@ -1,23 +1,22 @@
 ---
-title: "SQL Server 2022 Release Notes"
+title: "SQL Server 2022 release notes"
 description: Find information about SQL Server 2022 (16.x) limitations, known issues, help resources, and other release notes.
-ms.date: 11/01/2022
+author: MikeRayMSFT
+ms.author: mikeray
+ms.reviewer: randolphwest
+ms.date: 12/01/2022
 ms.service: sql
-ms.reviewer: ""
 ms.subservice: release-landing
 ms.topic: "article"
-ms.custom:
-- event-tier1-build-2022
-author: MikeRayMSFT
-ms.author: mikeray
+ms.custom: event-tier1-build-2022
 monikerRange: "= sql-server-ver16"
 ---
 
-# [!INCLUDE[SQL Server 2022](../includes/sssql22-md.md)] release notes
+# SQL Server 2022 release notes
 
-[!INCLUDE[SQL Server 2022](../includes/applies-to-version/sqlserver2022.md)]
+[!INCLUDE[sqlserver2022](../includes/applies-to-version/sqlserver2022.md)]
 
-This article describes requirements, limitations and known issues for [!INCLUDE[SQL Server 2022](../includes/sssql22-md.md)].
+This article describes requirements, limitations and known issues for [!INCLUDE[sssql22-md](../includes/sssql22-md.md)].
 
 ## Hardware and software requirements
 
@@ -31,69 +30,69 @@ This section identifies known issues you may experience with this product.
 
 #### Help
 
-When you execute `setup /HELP` the information returned does not include the new `/AZUREEXTENSION` feature. Complete information for `setup` is at [Install SQL Server on Windows from the command prompt](../database-engine/install-windows/install-sql-server-from-the-command-prompt.md).
+When you run `setup /HELP`, the information returned doesn't include the new `/AZUREEXTENSION` feature. Complete information for Setup is available at [Install SQL Server on Windows from the command prompt](../database-engine/install-windows/install-sql-server-from-the-command-prompt.md).
 
 #### Localized language interface
 
-In certain localized languages, the Azure Extension configuration screen controls may be partially overwritten or missing. To resolve issue, expand or maximize the Setup window from the default window sizing.
+In certain localized languages, the Azure Extension configuration screen controls may be partially overwritten or missing. To resolve this issue, expand or maximize the Setup window from the default window sizing.
 
 #### Software Assurance installation parameter
 
-There is a new Setup command line installation parameter - `/PRODUCTCOVEREDBYSA`. The parameter indicates if the provided product key (`/PID=`) license is covered under a Software Assurance or SQL Server Subscription contract, or just a SQL Server license.
+A new Setup command line installation parameter `/PRODUCTCOVEREDBYSA` indicates if the provided product key (`/PID=`) license is covered under a Software Assurance or SQL Server Subscription contract, or just a SQL Server license.
 
 [Install SQL Server on Windows from the command prompt](../database-engine/install-windows/install-sql-server-from-the-command-prompt.md) describes this parameter.
 
 #### Deprecated feature parameters
 
-The following features are not available in Setup in SQL Server 2022. If specified in command line installations or scripts, these previously supported parameters may fail.
+The following features aren't available in Setup in [!INCLUDE[sssql22-md](../includes/sssql22-md.md)]. If specified in command line installations or scripts, these previously supported parameters may fail.
 
 :::row:::
     :::column:::
-     - `\PolyBaseJava`
-     - `\SQL_INST_MR`
-     - `\SQL_INST_JAVA`
-     - `\SQL_INST_MPY`
+     - `/PolyBaseJava`
+     - `/SQL_INST_MR`
+     - `/SQL_INST_JAVA`
+     - `/SQL_INST_MPY`
     :::column-end:::
     :::column:::
-     - `\SQLJAVADIR`
-     - `\SQL_SHARED_MPY`
-     - `\SNAC_SDK`
-     - `\SQL_SHARED_MR`
+     - `/SQLJAVADIR`
+     - `/SQL_SHARED_MPY`
+     - `/SNAC_SDK`
+     - `/SQL_SHARED_MR`
     :::column-end:::
     :::column:::
-     - `\SDK`
-     - `\DREPLAY_CTLR`
-     - `\TOOLS`
-     - `\DREPLAY_CLT`
+     - `/SDK`
+     - `/DREPLAY_CTLR`
+     - `/TOOLS`
+     - `/DREPLAY_CLT`
     :::column-end:::
 :::row-end:::
 
 #### Reboot requirement
 
-When you install an initial SQL Server 2022 instance on a Windows Server 2022 machine, if the server does not have `VCRuntime140` version 14.29.30139 or later installed, Setup will require reboot.
+When you install an initial [!INCLUDE[sssql22-md](../includes/sssql22-md.md)] instance on a Windows Server 2022 machine, if the computer doesn't have `VCRuntime140` version 14.29.30139 or a later version installed, Setup will require a reboot.
 
-Windows Server 2022 was released with VCRuntime version 14.28.29914. 
+Windows Server 2022 was released with VCRuntime version 14.28.29914.
 
 ### Query Store for secondary replicas
 
 [Query Store for secondary replicas](../relational-databases/performance/query-store-for-secondary-replicas.md) is available for preview. It isn't available for use in production environments.
 
-### RPC calls fail with Encrypt=Strict
-- **Issue and customer impact**: Due to defect in TDS 8.0 protocol implementation RPC calls would fail if Encrypt option is set to Strict in connection string. Example would be running "sp_who" stored procedure.
-- **Applies to**: [!INCLUDE[SQL Server 2022](../includes/sssql22-md.md)] RTM
+### RPC calls fail with `Encrypt=Strict`
+
+An issue in the TDS 8.0 protocol implementation may cause RPC calls to fail if the `Encrypt` option is set to `Strict` in your connection string, for example when running the `sp_who` system stored procedure.
+
+**Applies to**: [!INCLUDE[sssql22-md](../includes/sssql22-md.md)] RTM
 
 ## Build number
 
 | Preview build | Version number | Date |
-|:--|:--|:--|
-| General release to market (RTM) | 16.0.1000.6  | November 16, 2022 |
-| RC 1    | 16.0.950.9 | September 22, 2022|
-| RC 0    | 16.0.900.6 | August 23, 2022|
+| :-- | :-- | :-- |
+| General release to market (RTM) | 16.0.1000.6 | November 16, 2022 |
+| RC 1 | 16.0.950.9 | September 22, 2022 |
+| RC 0 | 16.0.900.6 | August 23, 2022 |
 | CTP 2.1 | 16.0.700.4 | July 27, 2022 |
 | CTP 2.0 | 16.0.600.9 | May 20, 2022 |
 
 ## Next steps
 
-For related information about new features and capabilities in this version of SQL Server, see:
-
-[What's new in [!INCLUDE[sql-server-2022](../includes/sssql22-md.md)]](what-s-new-in-sql-server-2022.md).
+- [What's new in [!INCLUDE[sql-server-2022](../includes/sssql22-md.md)]](what-s-new-in-sql-server-2022.md).